this is the intro of the intro (reduction ad absurdum lol)

the context in which this study exists

this is about the current situation/why this study needs to exist

list 5/7 authors which are influential

establish the niche

there has been no significant study of the aesthetics of source code from a cross-disciplinary perspective. either you have cross-disciplinary (software studies, etc.) and they do not (or very little) (or through the poetics, not the aesthetics) address source code directly, or you have computer science and they only address it in terms of their own particular practice, sometimes reaching out to “literary” or “beautiful”, but without extensive theoretical backing. this thesis proposes to have both enter in a dialogue. a final component of the problem at hand is that there is little intertextual analyses of source code from a literary perspective, so far contained to text-by-text readings rather than more holistic approaches. and to figure out whether or not there is indeed an “objective” beauty of code?

what you propose to accomplish with the study

this work intends to demonstrate the role of aesthetics in source code in understanding a program. this demonstration will resolve the contradiction that, on one side, understanding is multi-faceted and, on the other side, there are language-independent and domain-independent practices which facilitate understanding.

include the focus, the value and the aim of the study

There are four things you need to remember when creating research objectives. Start each with a verb (identify, assess, evaluate, etc.). Have 3-5. These are:



the significance of the study

the significance of the study is the possibility to adopt close-reading practices to a body of texts which has so far remained largely unexplored. it is using both cross-disciplinary frameworks to further qualify a somewhat new and unique kind of text.

the central argument is that while aesthetics in code do have a close relationship with understanding, what it means to “understand” varies in the different groups it exists

epistemological position: close reading of code: empirical ontological position: written code matters differently than running code

the implications of the study

this study contributes to a finer understanding of programming as a a practice in-between engineering and literature; it creates this middle-ground not at the higher level of general concepts, but at the practical level of reading and writing. this practical approach ties the notions of understanding that we explore within a broader socio-economical context, and as such requalifies both engineering and literature as, respectively, sociotechnics and socioaesthetics.

a statement of the problem focuses on the issue we which to address

reformulate the sentence in establish the niche, but focusing more on actual problématiques

a justification of the methodology

the methodology is inductive, and qualitative. by gathering and reading primary sources, i establish the practice-based aesthetic standards to which practitioners submit their work. i propose an inductive approach first because there is no “criticism” in programming, but rather “peer-reviewing”, which means that anyone who writes, reads, and therefore what the writers and the readers say is equally important. second because the cross-disciplinary approach of analyzing those texts inherently forbids the blanket use of one theory mapped onto possibily different practices. rather, establishing a set of practices and then invoking theoretical frameworks to further qualify these practices avoids the trap of overfitting.

a word on assumptions and limitations

(1) i am assuming that aesthetics (including the lack thereof) is an essential part of source code. since it is not possible to separate both, every text becomes a valid means of examination since it would display some dimension of aesthetic properties. of course, some texts might be more useful than others. (2) i am assuming that writing practices are influenced by additional writing published in the field, from the art of computer programming to blog posts and best-practices lists (kinda theory of communicative action).

in terms of limitations, the clear distinction between closed-source and open-source will inherently limit the scope of our body of text. (2) there is also my limited understanding of certain languages and certain hardware. (3) the social component of the study also implies that i might not have access to specific language communities (i.e. hacking and educating in non-english or non-french languages), but that would be mitigated by the fact that most resources are based on english

a word from eco

with this work we propose to demonstrate the thesis that aesthetics play a role in the understandings of code; the previous research has left many questions unanswered, and the data gathered is still insufficient.

definition of the broad working fields

establish the specific issue at hand

introduce the research that is about to happen